New Branding - Please Critque!

Marshmallow300
Marshmallow300
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2018-05-28に共有
Please Critique, I feel that I can (probably) improve greatly!

Art: Entirely Marshmallow300, except the font, which is Billo. I backpacked it from @FontGod, on their "FontGods's Font Collection 2015"
Program: Entirely Marshmallow300
Inspiration: Other brandings, especially @-Vanilly-'s