Sci-Fi Short Film - "Lancer 21"

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Published 2023-10-26
After an incident with an unknown vessel a group of fighter pilots get more than they bargained for when they are ordered to investigate another signal inside the restricted area.

Check out the VFX Breakdown video HERE:
   • VFX Breakdown - "Lancer 21"  

Starring: Michael Forsch, Taylor Kilgore, & John Dimarco
Directed/VFX by: Dan Ciraulo
Cinematography by: John Dimarco ‪@DiMarco3‬

All Comments (21)
  • @jonnoble5624
    The perfect example of why "show, don't tell" needs to become the filmmakers' mantra again. I could go on and on but I'm afraid I wouldn't do it justice. It's a six-minute masterclass really.
  • @gabe9125
    "Heat level critical, shutdown sequence initiated" We got some Mechwarrior/Battletech fans in this house, folks
  • Part of what’s so good here, in addition to the visuals and writing, is the radio chatter. The key is to sound bored, like this is what you do every day. When people sound excited over the radio it makes it feel fake.
  • @Scarletlord
    He actually always survives and always dies, the perfect loop. A prison until the end of all things, that's my kind of horror.
  • @aieeegrunt
    “Set Condition One”, the helmet lights and shape, the blocky build of the Athena, so much BSG style and I love it
  • @loadtoad
    This would have made a GREAT Battlestar: Galactica episode! Absolutely loved it!!! RIBBIT!
  • @WarbirdPhoenix
    The laugh coming out of the storm was creepy enough,but knowing the origin was even creepier. No monsters,no hostile aliens,just a never ending loop of being killed by yourself as you go insane.
  • @CammieRacing
    Finally, an intelligently written sci-fi that doesn't need to feed us hand to mouth with what's going on and simply allows the viewer to be engaged.
  • @GySgtRay
    The acting and graphics were SPOT-ON.....well done! I'd love to see more of your work!!
  • @Nicholas_Chen_
    This is absolutely stunning. The nods to other scifi masterpieces are brilliant and you captured the desolation, mystery and claustrophobia in deep space very well. ❤
  • That was one intense opening sequence and MindF story arc for 6:26 minutes, most Hollywood "masterpice" need at least 3 hours to tell the story you told...just saying. Epic shor ❤
  • @ToddWaid1
    Very nicely done. I love the creepy storm. Gave me major Event Horizon vibes.
  • @thisnamewerx0350
    This video is top notch and the twist was perfect. I started laughing at the exact moment the pilot also started at the end. I freaking love it!
  • @thalon1
    an amazing short film with nods to Battlestar Galactica, and amazing special effects well done
  • I love that you used soundbytes from the game, MechWarrior 2, for the female AI voice. I played that game so much, I know the dialogues. It was a nostalgia trip for me. The film was interesting too!
  • @Jasey357
    Great short! Thanks, I even spotted the Mechwarrior voice effects. Made me smile 😉👍👍
  • @dose814
    Absolutely incredible Story telling, have not seen something this high qualitry in a long time I cant find the words to properly describe how well made this short film really is
  • @nymalous3428
    The computerized voice sounds like it comes from Mechwarrior 2 (4:36 "Autopilot engaged," 4:46 "Heat level critical," 4:48 "Shut down sequence initiated," 4:52 "Shut down sequence aborted"). Nicely made.
  • @BensPokePlace
    That Voice - Unmistakable. The Computer Female Voice from MechWarrior 2. All systems nominal.
  • @EvolvedTactical
    Very well done! Also, the Sidewinder tone for missile lock was a nice touch.