Sfm splatoon: summer incident

Feel free to Tell me any feedback and any improvements 02/01/2023: Wow this video is now one year old so to celebrate it I remake the thumbnail for the video

HER FRIEND TOOK HER EVERYWHERE BUT TO THE DOCTOR FOR HER EYE

"Ok,ok, smooth animation...good characters...nice storyline... realistic conversations...FIRST VIDEO EVER?!" In all seriousness, this was really fun to watch! Especially during the fight scenes, all the movements seemed so thought out! The character designs were also really creative! Though I feel like some parts of dialogue were a bit too fast, I ended up having to pause the video to read some of it. I'm not in SFM (yet) but something that helps me with that problem in video editing it so say the sentence out loud and then draw out the duration one second after you finish talking. Other than that, great video, especially for your first time!

Omg what a hurtful episode! Glad summer is ok

Good story not gonna lie The animation was ok (it's not bad don't worry), Grammer wasn't the best but it was still solid. Overall 7/10 HOWEVER this doesn't mean you should be discouraged. Keep up the good work

Best jump scare ever 1:15

Great animation. You deserve more subs. I feel very bad for what happened to Summer

I LOVE PENNY'S SONG

If I was Leon then I would squidbag Kai after killing him.

This was a good story😮😮😮

Madness

For your first sfm animation I wanna say it was amazing simply amazing I can tell you put a lot of heart into it

Everyones talking about summer because she got her eye poked out and her things stolen, but what about agent 3? her/his head got literally ripped off

Really impressive work!

I liked what I saw! Though, in certain parts, the text went by a little fast, mainly with the bigger pieces of dialogue. The grammar was a bit off too.

The animation is so good✨

SO GOOD!

Very fine.❤

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